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Poem: "Old Husbands' Tales"

Here is today's first freebie.  It was inspired by a prompt from ellenmillion that got me thinking about a matriarchal culture in Torn World.  So I took a look at that from a different perspective, and this is the result.  This poem will eventually be submitted to the Canon Board.


Old Husbands' Tales


The women may hold
"All That's Left"
of the land,
but the men too
have their secrets,
saved like the scraps
in a quilter's sack.

In the evenings
after the day's work
is done, they gather:
the old men
who have outlived
their powerful wives.

They tell over
the faded remnants
of ancient knowledge,
kept safe all this time
from those still swayed
by swaying hips.

This is the way
to mine gems,
to smelt metal,
to burn the black rock.
This is the way
to marry fire and water,
to make an engine,
to harness lightning.

They cannot do it
themselves;
they have not
the tools or the
freedom for it.
They only husband
this knowledge
for their grandsons.

Someday,
they whisper,
someday the time
will come
.

Nobody puts any stock
in the mutterings
of those men.
It's all just a bunch of
old husbands' tales.

But that does not
make it any less true.

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  • 7 comments
I like it. Very powerful.
Thank you! I have several poems from this fishbowl posted so far, and they seem popular.
This is a very nice addition to the history of Mojeveterk!
That's good to hear.

It could be interesting to explore what technology the Empire had when that barrier fell, and what tidbits the old men had kept in secret that nobody else had figured out how to redo yet.
Nicely done! I like how the imagery and wordplay continually evoke gender roles.
One of the cool things about Torn World is that it has great variation in gender dynamics. The Northern culture pretty much doesn't divide work by gender, and not much social stuff either; the main exceptions are practical ones, like women are supposed to stick to one mate per body-month. Then the Southern Empire has many different background cultures, some of which are matriarchal like this one and others are patriarchal. The Glifai don't draw distinctions like that, because of their genetic tendency toward androgyny and some no-gender people. So it really gives us a lot of contrast to work with.

There's a reason why the society went into convulsions over the Gender Reforms. Heh.
Lovely! Thank you!!