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The Writing & Other Projects of Elizabeth Barrette
Poem: "Hope of the Future"
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ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: August 5th, 2011 06:58 am (UTC) (Link)

Re: Well...

Oh, good. I was hoping it would work from that perspective. This feedback is very useful.

Two factors at play here:

1) I was deliberately playing against the presupposition that sharing a bed equates to sexual intercourse.

2) They pretty much had to share. Elan didn't have a blanket and couldn't afford a bed of his own. Hope wasn't willing to leave him in the lurch.
the_vulture From: the_vulture Date: August 5th, 2011 10:20 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: Well...

Well, it did seem to get a couple folks to double-take. :)
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