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Poem: "the two alchemists"
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ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: April 7th, 2011 08:39 pm (UTC) (Link)

Yes...

If you look at the story arc from beginning to end, you can see that it starts with an emphasis on the Origami Mage and her perspective -- but as it progresses, the Kirigami Mage becomes more complex and understandable as they interact with each other and the challenges along the way. I like the growing sense of balance.
the_vulture From: the_vulture Date: April 8th, 2011 03:16 am (UTC) (Link)

Re: Yes...

I like the growing sense of balance, too. :)
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