Below is the beginning of "Scars of Stone," a Torn World story currently in home revision. Revising this is one of today's projects. It will eventually be submitted for canon board approval.
"What?" Dareg said as he wheeled back to face her.
A rumpled line of mountains stretched along the horizon, skirted with dark green spruces. Fala traced her finger along a line of paler green where young spruces had recolonized an old fire trace. "There, where the young spruces point to that notch between the mountains," she said.