Elizabeth Barrette (ysabetwordsmith) wrote,
Elizabeth Barrette

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Sunday Fic Meme: "Scars of Stone"

Sunday fic meme
Each Sunday, post six sentences from a writing project -- published, submitted, in progress, for your cat -- whatever. (Ganked from DW)

Below is the beginning of "Scars of Stone," a Torn World story currently in home revision.  Revising this is one of today's projects.  It will eventually be submitted for canon board approval.

"Something is wrong with the mountain," Fala announced suddenly. She stopped her snow-unicorn to peer up the slopes.

"What?" Dareg said as he wheeled back to face her.

A rumpled line of mountains stretched along the horizon, skirted with dark green spruces. Fala traced her finger along a line of paler green where young spruces had recolonized an old fire trace. "There, where the young spruces point to that notch between the mountains," she said.
Tags: fantasy, fiction, meme, reading, science fiction, torn world, writing

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