Elizabeth Barrette (ysabetwordsmith) wrote,
Elizabeth Barrette
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Read "This Is Heaven"

 I was amused by "This Is Heaven" written by [personal profile] fayanora.  I often enjoy stories in which the afterlife is other than expected.
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wolfbrotherjoe

wolfbrotherjoe

January 14 2011, 15:48:37 UTC 10 years ago

I love the idea, and it amused me, but I think the last couple sentences combined 'getting digs in' with 'explaining the joke'. I think it could have been better if the Angels had been a little more caring, and had just ended right there with the forgetfulness.

All in all, nice idea, though.