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Poetry Fishbowl Open!

Starting now, the Poetry Fishbowl is open!  Today's theme is "Urban Fantasy" as selected by the audience in a poll.  I will be checking this page periodically throughout the day. When people make suggestions, I'll pick some and weave them together into a poem ... and then another ... and so on. I'm hoping to get a lot of ideas and a lot of poems.

Something new: Batched poems.  Previously I've written some poems that use the same characters or setting to explore different aspects of the same idea, most of them at random.  I'm open to doing that on purpose, if it doesn't create an overload.  So for instance, you might ask for a pair of poems showing two people's divergent viewpoints, or ask for a sequel to a poem you liked.


What Is a Poetry Fishbowl?

Writing is usually considered a solitary pursuit. One exception to this is a fascinating exercise called a "fishbowl." This has various forms, but all of them basically involve some kind of writing in public, usually with interaction between author and audience. A famous example is Harlan Ellison's series of "stories under glass" in which he sits in a bookstore window and writes a new story based on an idea that someone gives him. Writing classes sometimes include a version where students watch each other write, often with students calling out suggestions which are chalked up on the blackboard for those writing to use as inspiration.

In this online version of a Poetry Fishbowl, I begin by setting a theme; today's theme is "Urban Fantasy." I invite people to suggest characters, settings, and other things relating to that theme. Then I use those prompts as inspiration for writing poems.


Cyberfunded Creativity

I'm practicing cyberfunded creativity. If you enjoy what I'm doing and want to see more of it, please feed the Bard. The following options are currently available:

1) Sponsor the Fishbowl -- Here is a PayPal button for donations. There is no specific requirement, but $1 is the minimum recommended size for PayPal transactions since they take a cut from every one. You can also donate via check or money order sent by postal mail. If you make a donation and tell me about it, I promise to use one of your prompts. Anonymous donations are perfectly welcome, just won't get that perk. General donations will be tallied, and at the end of the fishbowl I’ll post a list of eligible poems based on the total funding; then the audience can vote on which they want to see posted.



2) Buy It Now! -- Gakked from various e-auction sites, this feature allows you to sponsor a specific poem. If you don't want to wait for some editor to buy and publish my poem so you can read it, well, now you don't have to. Sponsoring a poem means that I will immediately post it on my blog for everyone to see, with the name of the sponsor (or another dedicate) if you wish; plus you get a nonexclusive publication right, so you can post it on your own blog or elsewhere as long as you keep the credits intact. You'll need to tell me the title of the poem you want to sponsor. I'm basing the prices on length, and they're comparable to what I typically make selling poetry to magazines (semi-pro rates according to Duotrope's Digest).

0-10 lines: $5
11-25 lines: $10
26-40 lines: $15
41-60 lines: $20
Poems over 60 lines, or with very intricate structure, fall into custom pricing.

3) Commission a scrapbook page. I can render a chosen poem in hardcopy format, on colorful paper, using archival materials for background and any embellishments. This will be suitable for framing or for adding to a scrapbook. Commission details are here.  See new photos of sample scrapbooked poems: "Infinitesimal Angels and others"

4) Spread the word. Echo or link to this post on your LiveJournal, other blog, Twitter, Facebook, MySpace, Digg, StumbleUpon, or any other social network.  The Twitter hashtag is #poetryfishbowl.  Encourage people to come here and participate in the fishbowl.  If you have room for it, including your own prompt will give your readers an idea of what the prompts should look like; ideally, update later to include the thumbnail of the poem I write, and a link to the poem if it gets published.  If there is at least one new prompter or donor, I will post an extra freebie poem.


Additional Notes

1) I customarily post replies to prompt posts telling people which of their prompts I'm using, with a brief description of the resulting poem(s). If you want to know what's available, watch for those "thumbnails."

2) You don't have to pay me to see a poem based on a prompt that you gave me. I try to send copies of poems to people, mostly using the LJ message function.  (Anonymous prompters will miss this perk unless you give me your eddress.)  These are for-your-eyes-only, though, not for sharing.

3) Sponsors of the Poetry Fishbowl in general, or of specific poems, will gain access to an extra post in appreciation of their generosity.  While you're on the Donors list, you can view all of the custom-locked posts in that category.  Click the "donors" tag to read the archive of those.  I've also posted a list of other donor perks there.  I customarily leave donor names on the list for two months, so you'll get to see the perk-post from this month and next.

4) After the Poetry Fishbowl concludes, I will post a list of unsold poems and their prices, to make it easier for folks to see what they might want to sponsor.


Feed the Fish!
Now's your chance to participate in the creative process by posting ideas for me to write about. Today's theme is "Urban Fantasy."  (You can read more about urban fantasy online.  It does not have to be contemporary; past or future city prompts are welcome.  While most urban fantasy entails slight revisions of Earth, I'm also open to prompts about cities in other fantasy settings of mine.)  I'll be soliciting ideas for urbanites, non-urbanite fish-out-of-water characters, city-dwelling monsters, urban plants and animals, objects commonly found in cities, rural objects that might be amusing to chuck into a city, urban fantasy cliches you'd like to warp, classic or neo urban fantasy plots, events that happen in cities, urban legends, urban places fun to include in a fantasy story, individual cities you'd like to visit, unusual locations within a city, hazards or benefits particular to cities, and poetic forms in particular.  But anything is welcome, really. If you manage to recommend a form that I don't recognize, I will probably pounce on it and ask you for its rules. I do have the first edition of Lewis Turco's The Book of Forms which covers most common and many obscure forms.

I'll post at least one of the fishbowl poems here so you-all can enjoy it. (Remember, you get an extra freebie poem if someone new posts a prompt or makes a donation.) The rest will go into my archive for magazine submission.
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What would a city look like for people other than humans, with their different abilities and perceptions? Would a flying people still build skyscrapers? Would a burrowing people build anything above-ground? How do you find directions when traveling in a space-benders' city?

One of the themes I list in my user interests is "wildernism", the counterpart to "urbanism". How would one go about balancing these things if starting from a lack of experience, such as someone who's lived in the suburbs all their life?

Do stars build cities? Would anyone smaller recognize them as such?

Are there realms where cities don't exist? What reasons might there be for this?

And what happens when the kirigami mage stops at a city for the day?
Well, I wanted to get a poem about the Kirigami Mage on her own, but once again it's out of sequence. Here she is, all worn out and trying to find her way through a strange city, having to deal with all these people when she just wants to goflopnow. So this has to be shortly before "going to the ocean," a poem from the December fishbowl that has been sponsored but not yet published.

45 lines, Buy It Now = $20

Poem

ysabetwordsmith

10 years ago

Gargoyles.

Sewers and/or sewer rats.

Magical pranks at the science museum.

Things uncovered during remodeling.

Spring cleaning.

Sidewalks, particularly disrupting or maintaining them -- shoveling snow, re-laying brick, tree roots, utility repairs ...

Abstract sculpture. I can't immediately find a photo of the one I was thinking of, but this one is similar.
From your "gargoyles" prompt I got "Stonewings," which I'm posting as today's first freebie poem.

Poem

ysabetwordsmith

10 years ago

City spirits. ;)
Your prompt about city spirits brushed against one by marina_bonomi on newly appointed city gods. I remembered a long-ago fishbowl poem I wrote about a human woman named Dawn, who brought civilization to an alien race. So it seemed natural to continue the story with them making her into the guardian-spirit of their first city. "The City at the Sun's Edge" is written in couplet-rhymed quatrains.

36 lines, Buy It Now = $15

And in case you're wondering, "The Builders of Dawn" is still available; 12 lines = $10.
Not being a city person per say, this is a bit harder for me.

Public transport is something that makes me think city - smaller towns and rural areas do not have busses and subways. Subways in particular are kind of magical to me as a result (especially since the maps are NOT to scale at all - things that look miles apart are actually just blocks away, but the two lines don't connect, so they appear far apart).

Also, cities have sewers/under-street areas. Small rural towns don't, and as a kid shows like Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles and jokes about alligators in the sewers made sense in some way - sewers were these things we did not have, so of course it was easier to imagine strange things happening there (indeed, novels like Neverwhere by Neil Gaiman work for me for this very reason).

I am also a huge fan of gargoyles! I saw that the freebie poem is about them, and would love more. I have to run out and don't have time to read now, but I am sure I will like it if it has gargoyles!
I am pretty sure that dragons live in the New York subways.

eseme

10 years ago

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ysabetwordsmith

10 years ago

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ysabetwordsmith

10 years ago

Magic makes technology unstable... so what happens to cars, and phones, and (*gulp!*) airplanes?

Gaslight and cold iron

A magic-based ambulance
Your prompt "Gaslight and Cold Iron" turned into the title of a poem, written in rhymed and metered quatrains. It's a rather creepy bit of steampunk, in which fairies are used as streetlights -- a musing on how progress in any society tends to come at somebody's expense, and the people who benefit by it usually don't care. The more things change, the more they stay the same.

20 lines, Buy It Now = $10
University demons. This may only make sense in my head, due to my own experiences, and the patron demon of scribes, Titivillus.
Well, I wrote you a poem based on your prompt about Titivillus, combined with what minor_architect said about beginning-of-semester woes, but you probably won't want to read it. I think it would be triggery for you, so I don't recommend pointing it anywhere near your head. It is the history of Titivillus tormenting scribes, up to the point where universities start putting things online. You can imagine that this ends badly for everyone who is not a demon.

66 lines, Buy It Now = $33
A picture comment to "Petty Problems" by tuftears led to another poem, "The Teacup Griffin," a sad little free-verse portrait of what happens when people breed for appearance over performance.

10 lines, Buy It Now = $5
We talk about cities growing and decaying. If a city were to function like an organism, how would it obtain the resources it needed? How would it defend itself? How would it communicate? Would it have its own music? Would different cities intentionally compete with each other? Do cities have memories? Do they dream?
To your prompt about the growth and decay, I added one from akilika about why people move into or out of cities. The result is "Breathing People," which looks at cities as living creatures. I still had Detroit on the brain from whoever started that ball rolling, so the ending includes some rather disturbing imagery.

36 lines, Buy It Now = $15
Ever seen the DC subways? They're curvy and organic and rather beautiful in parts, and I've often thought that they must have been built by elves.
Some magical explanation for disappearing socks, etc.

Magical beings that can disguise themselves as machines or other stuff.

Magical beings that get into computers (like, into the software) and mess around with things inside.

Urban legends (like stolen kidneys) are true because the old monsters have found new tactics.

A world that looks just like ours but uses magic instead of technology. Maybe they burn pixie dust instead of gasoline, and the pixies are going extinct as a result. (Maybe pixie dust is made OF pixies?)

Some of the people in prison aren't really people.

Your house is out to kill you.

The literal ghost in the machine.

Maybe some of the real-world ramifications of the Ghostbusters mythos being real. What if ghosts really could be seen, captured, ectoplasm studied, etc.

Your late Aunt Gertrude still chats with you on Facebook. (This could either be super sweet or really creepy.)

An online game so addicting that if you play for too long, your soul gets sucked in and your body goes into a coma.

A lawyer defends a ghost or demon client against the charge of possession. (Maybe even possession with intent to distribute! :-D )

Child custody battle between a human and a fairy. (Either the kind you'd find in standard lore, or they were married and had halfblood kids.)

(I have a character who is a zombie and is also a lawyer for non-human civil rights. It's a comedy universe, so his name is Henry Fangballs.)
I combined your prompt about magical creatures disguising themselves as machines with one from janetmiles about fae adapting to iron. "Perishable Truths" describes what happens when the fae begin taking forms that will blend into the modern world, just as they used to blend into natural scenery. Humans are a little too slow on the uptake...

27 lines, Buy It Now = $15
Hmmm.

I lived in DC, and moved to fairly-rural Central New York. People often ask me, when I mention where I came from, "Why did you move here?"

That strikes me as the thing--moving to cities, moving from cities, and why people do it. There seem to be people (and, assumably, fantastic creatures) who just Work in one place or the other--and it's not always that they were born there. I guess that migration would be my idea.


Or, failing that, the idea of a monster entrepreneur. Entrepreneurship always occurred to me as . . . I don't know, basically dreams made real. I sort of wonder how a monster would take to that.
Your prompt about moving paired with one from laffingkat about cities as living creatures; look under her comment for the whole thumbnail of "Breathing People."
I'd love to know what a disgruntled bumble bee thinks as it goes from flower to flower (and what happened to make it disgruntled)!
The bumblebee is a New York bee with attitude and vocabulary to match. Well, that was a surprise. I must, however, rule the poetry student the winner in this altercation. Since Emily Dickenson wrote some of the lines I used, I'm making this the second freebie of the day.
Oh so very finished. *goflopnow*
The constant war between a city of iron and the green.
What happens to the ghosts when a haunted house is torn down?
The survival guide of the animals spirits in a city.
A building is an ecosystem.
Where do the shadows go at night?
The dysfunctional relationship of magic and technology.
There is another city under this one, where the unknown dwelled.
You can never graduate if you walk through a certain door in a university.
Wandering Jew
You just missed the open period. I hope you'll come back next month, though: Feb. 1, theme of "Vision and Sight."
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