Elizabeth Barrette (ysabetwordsmith) wrote,
Elizabeth Barrette
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Variations on a Theme

difrancis has a fascinating thread about repetition and variation in writing. I wrote a response and then decided to copy it here for you to enjoy.


As a reader, there are writers whose work I enjoy no matter what they're writing (waves at haikujaguar; and there are writers who only gratify me with a certain series, setting, or cast of characters (I only enjoy the Honor Harrington novels that are chiefly about Honor, not the "Honorverse").

All writers have themes they favor, just as readers have certain tastes in stories they like to read. Even for writers who have a huge range, like me, we have favorites. You'll see me return to tropes like nonstandard sexes and xenolinguistics because those are topics I enjoy exploring -- and each time I'll be doing something a little different with it.

I love watching a favorite writer revisit a favorite theme and vary it. Once I've locked a favorite, I only get bored if they really repeat the same theme, treatment, implications, and description; or if a character totally fails to grow in a series. I mean look at how many alien sexes haikujaguar has written/painted ... and the biological and plot implications are different for each. One of the things I like about difrancis is that tendency to go after the hero or hera (or both) with a shrimp fork to get the tender bits out. That's illuminating; it encourages contemplation of what it means to be heroic. (One of my darrow elves once said to me, quite dryly, "May I have my soul back now? I see you're finished with the wringer.") And not every writer does that.

As a writer, if I feel like I've done too much of something, what I usually do is switch settings. I'll look for a setting that's totally different from what I've just been doing. That changes my description -- sometimes even my whole voice. Frex, almost everything I write contains vivid imagery; but my dark fantasy world Penumbra is almost devoid of it, all action and dialog. (I didn't even realize I was doing that with Penumbra until I got into a fight about it with Doug.) The setting has strong influence on what kind of people will be in a story and what kind of trouble they'll get into.

But you can also switch things around by seeking a character who is totally different. They fixate on different things -- one will be a tomcat over girls, another will be indifferent until the right one appears; one will be a scholar and able to name everything, another will only care about how to kill it.

At least once in a while, write (and read) outside your comfort zone. Aim not for the path of least resistance, but the path of greatest resistance. That's why my bio often lists "spelunking in other people's reality tunnels" as a hobby.
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The farther a person is from the mainstream, the more likely their writing is to say something unique and fascinating. So I wouldn't give up on your potential to contribute something original, if you're quirky enough to be hanging around me.

If all you've seen of mermaids are the safe stories ... you haven't seen much. Check out some of cadhla's lyrics, for example. I've done some mermaid poems that are dark, and some that are sassy; I don't think I've done any I'd describe as "safe" or "gentle." Well, maybe the one about the musician with repetitive-stress injury.

If you don't like the examples you've seen, feel free to ignore them and devise something totally different. But I would suggest that you read more widely. A good starting point is to look for fairy tales outside of European traditions.
I should add, if you want to see examples of fiction that is so far out, you can hardly even see here from there -- read anything by Bard Bloom. sythyry is a fictional journal that's a good place to start, but the recently published A Marriage of Insects is also highly recommended. And there are other novels coming that are even more far out, if he can find publishers with a jot of brains to buy them.

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Yay! I love turning people onto good books. You might also check out crowdfunding where writers and artists are connecting directly with audiences ... much of that stuff is too exotic for traditional publishers. Oh, and shadesong has been doing beautiful, bittersharp retellings of fairy tales, in conjunction with her daughter.

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I'm glad to hear it!

Please make a post on crowdfunding so people will know who you are. We have creative people, donors, and curious onlookers among our membership so far. Often people span more than one role.

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Glad I could help. For plot-dominant fiction, try Stephen Gould. The original _Jumper_ (not the movie version) and _Wildside_ both take a single concept and play through all its ramifications very methodically. Some of haikujaguar's stories are dialogue rich; and Lois McMaster Bujold is also brilliant at dialogue ... _The Curse of Chalion_ is a good starting point. There's some epic dialogue in her Vorkosigan series but it takes a while to go from good to great to epic.

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I have read some scripts and made some explorations at writing scripts, and concluded that script is not an ideal style for me. I could proofread one. I could comment on the story being told, whether it made sense or not, whether the characters were believable, etc. But serious editing of the script itself ... probably not. I'm not the only editor at ACE though; my partner may have more script experience than I do. Post your query to the site, give us an idea of what you want done, and we'll let you know if it's within our range.