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Poetry Fishbowl Open!

Starting now, the Poetry Fishbowl is open!  Today's theme is "doors and passages." I will be checking this page periodically throughout the day. When people make suggestions, I'll pick some and weave them together into a poem ... and then another ... and so on. I'm hoping to get a lot of ideas and a lot of poems.

NEW IDEA: If you are promoting this fishbowl with a reference on your own blog, please consider including your own prompt(s) there.  It lets your readers see an example of what I'm looking for, and then later they can drop by and find out what I've done with it.

ELECTION DAY: After I post this, I'll go vote.  You folks start posting your prompts, and I'll begin writing when I get home.  Have you voted today?  If so, please mention it in your comment!  I'll be making a list of voters, and then I'll add them to my "Donors" list this month so you can enjoy the perk-post.


What Is a Poetry Fishbowl?

Writing is usually considered a solitary pursuit. One exception to this is a fascinating exercise called a "fishbowl." This has various forms, but all of them basically involve some kind of writing in public, usually with interaction between author and audience. A famous example is Harlan Ellison's series of "stories under glass" in which he sits in a bookstore window and writes a new story based on an idea that someone gives him. Writing classes sometimes include a version where students watch each other write, often with students calling out suggestions which are chalked up on the blackboard for those writing to use as inspiration.

In this online version of a Poetry Fishbowl, I begin by setting a theme; today's theme is "doors and passages." I invite people to suggest characters, settings, and other things relating to that theme. Then I use those prompts as inspiration for writing poems.


Cyberfunded Creativity

I'm practicing cyberfunded creativity. If you enjoy what I'm doing and want to see more of it, please feed the Bard. The following options are currently available:

1) Sponsor the Fishbowl -- Here is a PayPal button for donations. There is no specific requirement, but $1 is the minimum recommended size for PayPal transactions since they take a cut from every one. You can also donate via check or money order sent by postal mail. If you make a donation and tell me about it, I promise to use one of your prompts. Anonymous donations are perfectly welcome, just won't get that perk. General donations will be tallied, and at the end of the fishbowl I’ll post a list of eligible poems based on the total funding; then the audience can vote on which they want to see posted.

2) Buy It Now! -- Gakked from various e-auction sites, this feature allows you to sponsor a specific poem. If you don't want to wait for some editor to buy and publish my poem so you can read it, well, now you don't have to. Sponsoring a poem means that I will immediately post it on my blog for everyone to see, with the name of the sponsor (or another dedicate) if you wish; plus you get a nonexclusive publication right, so you can post it on your own blog or elsewhere as long as you keep the credits intact. You'll need to tell me the title of the poem you want to sponsor. I'm basing the prices on length, and they're comparable to what I typically make selling poetry to magazines (semi-pro rates according to Duotrope's Digest).

0-10 lines: $5
11-25 lines: $10
26-40 lines: $15
41-60 lines: $20
Poems over 60 lines, or with very intricate structure, fall into custom pricing.

3) Commission a scrapbook page. I can render a chosen poem in hardcopy format, on colorful paper, using archival materials for background and any embellishments. This will be suitable for framing or for adding to a scrapbook. Details are here.  New photos of sample scrapbooked poems are here.

4) Spread the word. Echo or link to this post on your LiveJournal, other blog, Twitter, Facebook, MySpace, Digg, StumbleUpon, or any other social network.  The Twitter hashtag is #poetryfishbowl.  Encourage people to come here and participate in the fishbowl.  If you have room for it, including your own prompt will give your readers an idea of what the prompts should look like.  If there is at least one new prompter or donor, I will post an extra freebie poem.


Additional Notes

1) I customarily post replies to prompt posts telling people which of their prompts I'm using, with a brief description of the resulting poem(s). If you want to know what's available, watch for those "thumbnails."

2) You don't have to pay me to see a poem based on a prompt that you gave me. I try to send copies of poems to people, mostly using the LJ message function.  (Anonymous prompters will miss this perk unless you give me your eddress.)  These are for-your-eyes-only, though, not for sharing.

3) Sponsors of the Poetry Fishbowl in general, or of specific poems, will gain access to an extra post in appreciation of their generosity.

4) After the Poetry Fishbowl concludes, I will post a list of unsold poems and their prices, to make it easier for folks to see what they might want to sponsor.


Feed the Fish!
Now's your chance to participate in the creative process by posting ideas for me to write about. Today's theme is "doors and passages."  I'm soliciting prompts for gateways, threshold experiences, hidden doors, secret passages, things that appear from behind doors, the symbolism of doors and passages, journeys, plot twists involving doors, places where interesting entrances or exits can be found, and poetic forms in particular. But anything is welcome, really. If you manage to recommend a form that I don't recognize, I will probably pounce on it and ask you for its rules. I do have the first edition of Lewis Turco's The Book of Forms which covers most common and many obscure forms.

I'll post at least one of the fishbowl poems here so you-all can enjoy it. (Remember, you get an extra freebie poem if someone new posts a prompt or makes a donation.) The rest will go into my archive for magazine submission.
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Hey, Love!

There's a door in (the online game) Kingdom of Loathing which opens to a different location dependent on which of seven possible keys you use to unlock it. Engage the extrapolation engine and push this concept to infinity: a door that will open anywhere that one wants (or needs) it to, *if* one can create an appropriate key.

(And as you know, I also voted today! )

Love you,
Doug
I combined your prompt about a door that opens anywhere with a whole bunch of prompts from janetmiles. The result is "The Door of Keys," which describes a mystical door opened by the key to your heart.

23 lines, Buy It Now = $10
I'm home from voting.

And there are so many prompts that I may easily duplicate things.

I always liked the title of Robin McKinley's Door in the Hedge because I think garden gates and arbors are terribly cool.

And I think the fairy door project is cool: http://www.urban-fairies.com/locationspages/locations.html
(all doors pictured are roughly dollhouse sized)
Want want want want want want want!!!

When I own a house some day, it WILL HAVE fairy doors.

*stops bouncing*

eseme

10 years ago

Poem

ysabetwordsmith

10 years ago

I've been re-reading Charles Dudley Warner's 1879 book "My Winter on the Nile". It seems that in those days, tourists hired hybrid sailboat/rowboats called dabeëh's to travel on the river. The captain of the boat was called a rëis, but when the boat reached the first cataract, there was another rëis with a crew that helped the boats to make the passage of the cataract. Warner spoke of the difficult and frightening passage of the cataract and of entering a new world called Nubia, with a completely different culture, populus and pace of life. The rëis of the cataract and his ancestors had been doing this work for millennia. It seems there might be a poem there somewhere.

I planned to go to work early in the morning and come home early enough to vote before the polls closed, but an early-morning meeting was canceled at the last minute, and I went to the local elementary school, met my neighbors (including some I only see at town meeting and election day), and voted before leaving for work.
Your prompt about the Nile led to the free-verse poem "The Captain of the Caratract." It details some of the history of travel, and how old family traditions can resurface in new forms later on.

21 lines, Buy It Now = $10
Ah, now that I have had time to look over your post again, I see that I should have mentioned that I voted.

Also, since it is All Soul's Day and right around the time of Samhain and Dia de Los Muertos, I think anything related to the passage of the dead or purgatory or interactions between the living and the dead would be appropriate.
I combined "the passage of the dead" with prompts by wyld_dandelyon, siliconshaman, and aldersprig. The result is the free-verse poem "Puerta de los Muertos." It describes one kind of door used for travel between this world and the next, according to Voodoo tradition.

10 lines, Buy It Now = $5
So what about the relation of a door's shape to it's function? Or the physiology of that which it is supposed to admit?
Ooh, physiology makes me think of cell membranes, and the blood-brain barrier, and how different substances move through the body using ion channels. And then of course there's the threshold experience of action potentials, transmitting a message from neuron to neuron or causing a muscle to contract.

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ysabetwordsmith

10 years ago

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the_vulture

10 years ago

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ysabetwordsmith

10 years ago

Re: Poem

the_vulture

10 years ago

What about rituals and traditions associated with doorways? Like carrying the bride over the threshold? Or decorating a doorway with charms and such, like an iron horseshoe for luck? Taking one's shoes off at the doorway? Knocking on the door to gain admittance? Being seen to the door?
Eyes as the doorways to the soul
Sound as a passageway.

And I did vote.
The door as a boundary, as a guardian to privacy and a protector of secrets.

I love the secret passageways and secret doorways prompts too.
To "the door as a boundary" I added other prompts from janetmiles, ladyqkat, and aldersprig. The result is the free-verse poem "To Build a Door," which is all about what a door defines and creates when you make one.

21 lines, Buy It Now = $10
Brain tired. *goflopnow*
How chaos came to the cosmos $10
The underground garden $15
The door of keys $10
To build a door $10
RUT $5
All of those poems have now been posted. "RUT?" is fully funded and visible in whole on its original page; I've posted a note to this effect as well.
Which poems are available? Can any poem posted in your LJ be commissioned for a scrapbook page, or would I be limited to poems that I sponsored? And how long do commissions normally take to complete and deliver? Seems like a great gift idea.
>> Which poems are available? <<

All of them.

>> Can any poem posted in your LJ be commissioned for a scrapbook page, or would I be limited to poems that I sponsored? <<

Any poem in my LJ is fair game for scrapbooking. So is any other poem I've written, if you know what it is. On at least one occasion, someone bought a scrapbooked version of a poem they'd seen backchannel, but didn't get sponsored. If you can't find a topic that you want, ask me and I'll check my archives; there are thousands of poems in there. I can also write custom poetry from scratch, which works similar to how I handle prompts, just with a little more shopper direction.

>> And how long do commissions normally take to complete and deliver? <<

That depends on the piece(s). A single page that I print directly on the page and embellish with simple stuff I already have -- I can do that in less than hour, and have it ready to mail the next time we go into town (usually we make 2 trips a week). More pages, or layers of paper cut and fastened together, would take more time but still really just an evening's work. I've done two and three page spreads before. The main delay is if you happen to ask for something that requires materials I don't already have in my craft supplies; I often use stickers, punches, die cuts, papers, etc. that match the theme of the poem which means that sometimes I need to visit a scrapbooking store to hunt for what I need. That can run up a few days or more just to get the goods.

Shipping depends on how fast you want it to arrive; I usually send scrapped poems First Class, which arrives after several business days. Rush orders would cost more.

Ideally, allow plenty of lead time. If you want something for Christmas, now would be a good time to start thinking about it. For birthdays or other special occasions, it's probably prudent to allow at least a couple of weeks. I can work pretty fast -- but I don't have high confidence in the Post Orifice.

>> Seems like a great gift idea. <<

It can be, yes. Anyone who likes scrapbooking or papercrafted wall art will probably get a kick out of it. Some of the fancy things I've done have gotten really elaborate -- I used metal filigree once, and I've done up to 5 layers of paper -- although even the basic ones can be quite eye-catching. There are several people who have ongoing collections of my scrapbooked poetry that I add to periodically. I've also had a handful of patrons buy scrapbooked poems as gifts for people they know, and it seems to work.

I hope this helps. Let me know if you're interested.
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