This poem came out of the April 6, 2010 Poetry Fishbowl. It was inspired and sponsored by marina_bonomi. It also features the same protagonist as in the March fishbowl poem "folded wings." The two morals at the end are poetic paraphrases of Buddhist sayings.
kirigami mage
watches her gentle rival
and shreds green paper
origami mage
envies no glinting scissors
so keeps hands folded
kirigami mage
folds and cuts a spiderweb
to trap her rival
origami mage
folds a gold dragon and flies
over the crude trap
kirigami mage
snips a blizzard of snowflakes
and hurls them skyward
origami mage
replies with a peony
shortening the storm
kirigami mage
strikes back with cherry blossoms
of fading beauty
origami mage
lifts a chrysanthemum shield
and goes on her way
who envies others
does not obtain peace of mind
in this mortal world
be patient in one
moment of anger and you
escape a hundred
Re: You're welcome!
April 7 2010, 20:44:48 UTC 11 years ago
I've a vague image in my mind's eye of a collection of poems about her, and possibly other origami mages (a whole clan of them?) illustrated with sketches and /or more polished illustrations by a group of artists.
Could it work as a crowd-founded project? What do you think?
Hmm...
April 7 2010, 21:23:25 UTC 11 years ago
That has potential.
>> and possibly other origami mages (a whole clan of them?) <<
Perhaps there could be "schools" of mages, like the martial arts, each with its own strengths and techniques. Origami, kirigami, kirie, etc.
>> illustrated with sketches and /or more polished illustrations by a group of artists.<<
That would be fun. To reproduce as a collection, inked illustrations would probably work better than pencil sketches. Another possibility would be to include some photos or scans of paper crafts.
>> Could it work as a crowd-founded project? What do you think? <<
It might work. The first part is how enthusiastic the audience and patrons get with inspiring and sponsoring more poems in this series. We might, for instance, hunt around for a plot thread. Then there's the question of what format people would like -- do they want a hardcopy chapbook, or an electronic file, or what? Something like a fancy little handmade collector's edition, or a very simple chapbook? Different pros and cons for each.
Re: Hmm...
April 7 2010, 21:30:36 UTC 11 years ago
Going to bed now, but tomorrow I'll post on my LJ linking to your poems...
Cool!
April 8 2010, 16:46:41 UTC 11 years ago
It will be fun to see how this plays out.