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The Writing & Other Projects of Elizabeth Barrette
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Poetry Fishbowl Open!
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technomage From: technomage Date: March 2nd, 2010 07:50 pm (UTC) (Link)

New here... be patient

I am earth, so what fascinates me is air. Directional winds (North Wind). Zephers. Willowwhisps. Thermals with Buzzards. Dustdevils. Tornados. Huricanes. Spring breezes.
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technomage From: technomage Date: March 2nd, 2010 09:51 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: New here... be patient

You're welcome... this is fun. I am reasonably certain I could not make these poems happen. Now to find out what one says...
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: March 2nd, 2010 08:53 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: New here... be patient

Welcome! Thank you for visiting the fishbowl.

Your prompt made me think about the "antagonistic elements" (Earth/Air, Fire/Water) and how they would feel about each other. Nature abhors a vacuum. So I wrote "The Attraction of Opposites" to explore the ways in which the elements try to meet each other. The first two verses are about Earth and Air. This poem is written in tercets, most with lines of ascending length, then the last one switches to lines of descending length.

15 lines, Buy It Now = $10
technomage From: technomage Date: March 2nd, 2010 09:41 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: New here... be patient

Bought It Just Then... money winging through the coin-transporter as I type... like micro financing, but for art rather than buisness.
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: March 2nd, 2010 10:51 pm (UTC) (Link)

Thank you!

I have received notice of your payment and posted "The Attraction of Opposites" in a separate post so everyone can see it.

Also, your cat/bird icon is awesome.
technomage From: technomage Date: March 2nd, 2010 11:41 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: Thank you!

I also love that icon... originally Escher art, someone giffed it, I gacked it from Ladypeyton, but have no idea who the artist was originally :(
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