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Poem: "Midnight at the Cheldzan"
Today [info]haikujaguar posted a picture of a favorite character, Dlane, returned after a long absence.

Dlane Smug Again
Dlane Smug Again


So I wrote the following poem. The Cheldzan Jokku is here, a monument to when the Jokka first hit print. It includes a lexicon for you conlang fans.


Midnight at the Cheldzan



I’ve missed this place.
I haven’t been here for a long time.

In the dark of the night,
the cheldzan Jokku is quiet.
The coals of a campfire still glow dimly.
Here on a flat rock
lie scattered remnants of the day’s activities:
a map traced in rainbow squares,
the colored stones of a jenadha game,
and several pieces of a half-finished clay
about eku, the truedark hour.

The eperu are dream-dozing under a tree,
their ñedsu curled asleep at their feet.
In the shadows, the tethered rikka
make soft herd-murmurs.

I haven’t been here for a long time.
I’ve missed this place.

The curve of the tree trunk embraces my back
as I lean against it, waiting for
the light of ide and the bustle of day.

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Current Mood: nostalgic

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razzek From: [info]razzek Date: January 30th, 2008 02:00 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh, this was lovely! I've missed the Jokka, too, and I was very excited to see Dlane make an appearance in [info]haikujaguar's gallery. :)
archangelbeth From: [info]archangelbeth Date: January 30th, 2008 02:00 pm (UTC) (Link)
Nifty! I likes.
haikujaguar From: [info]haikujaguar Date: January 30th, 2008 05:47 pm (UTC) (Link)
Squee!

(That's all I have the brainpower for at the moment.)
ysabetwordsmith From: [info]ysabetwordsmith Date: January 30th, 2008 09:41 pm (UTC) (Link)

Thank you!

*bow, flourish* I'm glad you liked it.
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