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This poem was prompted and sponsored by nhpeacenik.
Telephoto Futures The psychic photographer does not know why people are following her. She isn't very good yet -- she needs to work on her focus, and she needs to improve her framing, and when she tries to put her finger on what's wrong it shows up on the film. But people are following her anyway.
At first she eludes them by luck. Then she eludes them with foresight, snapping images of where they will be so she can be somewhere else. When she catches one of them passionately kissing his mistress she gets an idea. That's the first photo that she sells to a tabloid before the event in question actually happens. The timing, she discovers, is tricky. She has to release the incriminating evidence early enough to be impressively predictive, but not so early that the victim can spot it and avoid fulfilling it. As she studies her stalkers more carefully, she begins to lose interest in racehorses and partial lottery numbers. Instead she learns what they do when they're not chasing her, where they work, what they fear. She learns they are hired by politicians and by the military, and that spooks -- like cockroaches -- are terrified of the light. Smiling, the psychic photographer visualizes exchanging her long telephoto lens for a short-range zoom and a flashbulb. Tags: cyberfunded creativity, fantasy, fishbowl, magic, poem, poetry, reading, science fiction, writing Current Mood: busy
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Writing is like art. The foreground and subject are in sharp focus. The background usually is not. You have to learn how to paint the dusky blue hills in the distance, without trying to fill in every tree back there ... and do it in a way that makes people want to go there.
This is why, as a writer, I try to pay attention to what my characters are noticing. Some of them are obsessed with food, some with clothes, others are like bloodhounds and only notice the trail of action they're following so that the surrounding just kind of fade out. I watch for the moments when someone lifts their gaze to the horizon, or the sky, because it helps the readers understand that there's a whole world out there, and it is not small. Detail, detail, detail ... scope. This works well enough for me that I've had readers make long-jumps to conclusions based on reading between the lines, and peg what obscure culture I was using for partial inspiration, or things like that.
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